Friday 10 February 2017

The loud noise

On this Friday, Mint was played with her friends her name are G and Kitty. When the school is desist Mint was came home but before Mint came home G and kitty ask "Can I go to have sleep at your home"  Mint said  "Yes". Mint and her friends are at  Mint house when Mint and her friends are sleeping and there was a loud noise that came from the neighbor because their had a party and open a song so loud. Mint tell her mom to ask the neighbor. Mint's mom went to neighbor house and ask "Can you turn down the volume" The neighbor said "Okay". Mint's mom came home Mint and her friends was sleeping and have a sweet dream.

3 comments:

Mr Paul said...

I thought they might join in the party!!

Careful with the tense.

Aimee HHIS said...

The first sentence after the word Friday must have a comma.

Ploy said...

okay