Friday 3 February 2017
The pirates are lost
Bang! goes the lightning.¨Aboard the ship¨ the captain shouted. Everyone on the ship ran around to keep the ship going.But it was to late the enemy won.After the loss,the ship can't be controlled so they were stuck. Then a big wave of hope pushed the ship to a dessert island.The pirates had no idea where they were,even the captain did not know! at lest they got somewhere.even if they were stuck.The pirates panicked because they had no water no food and nothing to keep them alive,so what will they do?
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Hi Fiona,
I really like that you used a question at the end of your story, but remember to put capital letters after a full stop.
I really like the image of "a big wave of hope".
Desert island only has one "s", a "dessert island" would be an island made of cake or ice cream!!!
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