Today was my brother’s birthday
We went to the Zoo. When I arrived, I fainted and collapsed on the floor because it was too hot.
A man, with a crocodile shirt, came and brought me an orange juice.
After drinking it he took us on a tour in his helicopter.
We saw many animals within compound.
There was a pelican with it wide mouth eating a fish. After the ride, he gave my little brother a crocodile chocolate cake.
I adopted the pelican that was eating the fish. I named it Flurry because it had a lot of beautiful fur.
6 comments:
Lovely story using your imagination.
i like the story its lovely;>
Hi Rose,
I really enjoy reading your story because it is very creative but be careful with your it and it's.
What is the title of this story?
where is your title
yes where is your title ?Rose
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