Thursday, 26 January 2017
About me
Today I was going to school I was texting to my best friends called Ploy,Aim,Leah,Nathan.I got to school and we played 4 square for a bit and then we went to the library to read some books with my friend.It was time to go in to class we had time to play hang man and then we all won the game.When class was done we pretended to play under ground we use steel knife but Nathan fell down and started to be tearful.Nathan had an mauve bandage on his leg and we had carrots for snack time.
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4 comments:
Well done, you have managed to get the 5 words into your writing.
When writing a list, replace the last comma with "and".
eg: I was texting to my best friends called Ploy,Aim,Leah and Nathan.
Thank you for including my name into your story.
Try to spread the word out a bit not just use it only at the end of the story.
I really like how you wrote about me but next time don't use the same words over and over.
Great idea to do the story at a school but did you mean one of your friend in the sentence.Read some books with my friend.
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