The weather in Thai island is very freezing cold these days.The weather in the summer is very warm and useful for the flowers.cold are very hot and some night are very cold.The weather in Christmas is pretty nice and warm. The weather in hallowed is is very very cold. Nearly every single night its very cold you will need to where a jacket nearly every night.sprig is very nice and hot at night it is very warm you don`t need a duvet on top of you at all the view is very beautiful and nice
6 comments:
Hi Bia,
Your story was very pleasing but try to make more sense towards writing it. Next time try to work on you punctuation and spelling.
From your friend, Leah
Hi Bia, I like how you wrote about the Thai island.But next time try to watch with your spelling.
From Nathan
It's good that you telling Thailand's weather fact.
Use capital letter after full stop and correct your spelling too.Can you check your story again?
Hi Bia,sorry I didn't say hi last time.On the last sentence you forget the full stop.
You have given an overview of the weather at different times of year, though I'm not sure how accurate it is...very freezing cold...Really?!!!
I like how you put many events in your story like Christmas and Halloween but maybe correct your spelling next time.
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