Saturday, 21 January 2017
Daniel's 100 WC
The weather of the wold changed it keep changed and changed and changed everyday as the weather changed, they are trying to survive in the rain in the sun and in the Storm and some people need to deal with the sea and the air and the ice in Antarctica is melting and tsunami and earthquake and what do you think is going to happen in 2018 but now we need to deal with 2017 and the last 2 yeas it was good before it was cool but now look is so hot and the water is so bad...... bye.
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5 comments:
You are right about the impact of extreme weather, and very well done with your spellings.
You need to use more punctuation to give your work structure, so think where capital letters and full stops should be.
I don't think you have to deal with 2017 because the weather might not be that bad...bye.
You spelled world wrong but the rest are the best.
I like that your story is about tsunami's and earthquakes but next time try to publish your stories on time!
I like that you talk about the earthquake but try to use comma and full stop.
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