Friday, 24 February 2017
bingbing100writing
Hi my name is BingBING i going to tell you about dog named Doge. This dog was a famous in Facebook.people like Doge in Doge house.Doge mom take a video to YouTube and Doge is have a people are subscribe Doge,Doge have a 1405k subscribe in one video people more then 100k are looking for Doge.Doge go to japan and Doge have a his game name is Doge meme and Doge coin and I like Doge too but in one week Doge going to swim but Doge like it and today it is End
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6 comments:
Don't forget the full stop after End.
You have used full stops really well in the first few sentences, but the last one is much too long and gets confusing.
I like Doge but use more capital when starting a sentence.
Your story is very good.
It is a good name for a dog.
But don't forget to put fullstop at the end and put some capital letters
You did really well but the sentence this dog was a famous in Facebook but you can right this dog was famous in Facebook.
Hi BingBing,
I really like that your story is about a dog named Doge.
But try not too use Doge to many times.
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