I shivered as I walked down the corridor. The people were starting and laughing, the noise was so loud you could hear it from a mile away. I am the only Korean at this American school so no wonder. I heard whispers as I walked around the corner to the field . I quietly hummed the song my mother sang to me as I walked over to Wendy. Her family is a bit Chinese. She's my best friend here. I looked at what she was looking at. A girl playing football. "She's the girl I told you about. Merlin" she said.
1 comment:
I love the use of short sentences to give the writing pace.
Careful with here / hear.
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