Thursday, 23 February 2017
My best friends embarrassing moments
Hi my name is Darla .I want to talk about my best friends most embarrassing moment.Okay I know that she will not like it but I really want to so here it goes.One day me and Dasha went to the library to listen to music with our headphones but when she played the music everyone heard it and she was listening to my little pony,We're also in year 12 get your head together Dasha! so this was fun to write and i hope you will like it too and I hope Dasha wouldn't listen to that anymore.
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6 comments:
That really is quite embarrassing, especially in Year 12!!
Almost as embarrassing as forgetting to use a capital "I" in Year 6!!!
Get your head together Fiona :)
You should put Capitals Letters at I
But the rest is very good
Well done Fiona! I really like your work. The only problem was already pointed out by Mr. Paul, but other than that I loved it.
Try to use more capital letters but the rest was funny!
Hi Fiona,
I really like your story.
Remember to put commas in.
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