Friday 10 February 2017

The Baby's Maid

"Uhhhh how cute." said the maid. "The baby is been born, the baby is been born!" said the other maid while dancing. The queen which is the baby's mother walked in the room gracefully then she picked up the baby gently and sang "My beautiful baby, my beautiful baby, m...." "Bang!!!" went the loud noise. The noise was SO loud that it angered the baby and made the baby cried. Unfortunately, all of the maids sang a soft lullaby that could put the a baby to sleep. While the maids were singing the bright stars just appeared around the baby.

1 comment:

Mr Paul said...

Great use of adjectives (gracefully, gently). Well done.

Careful to use the correct tense.