I left my classroom, with my old, torn school bag hanging off my shoulder. I quickly ran to the car, I was so delighted that school was finally over for the year! I huddled into the car with my sister beside me. The engine started and we were going home! Then suddenly I saw a van, a very big van drive past us. A siren rang,
the noise was SO loud that I had to put my fingers in my ears! Then quickly it drove past us and vanished into the mist ahead.....
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Great use of prompt! I'm guessing it was an ambulance that drove past. Very good description.
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Was the siren a police car chasing the van, or the van itself? Interesting...
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