Friday, 24 March 2017
Abandoned Hospital
My day started when I was with my cousin James.He told me that we should go to an abandoned hospital near by,but rumors say that if anyone dare to go there,there will be no where out.It was Halloween at the time we where going there, as we were walking to the abandoned hospital,I could already here weird noises from the hospital,after minutes of walking we got to the abandoned hospital.My cousin told me to go inside with him,I said 'are you crazy' so we went inside and I saw a skull so small,'but how can something so tiny?'.
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It would make more sense in your spooky story to say "But how can something BE so tiny?"
After there,there will be no where out. It must be there,there will be no way out. and the bit that I like was are you crazy was the funniest. Well done for doing 100 word challenge.
I like the part when you said "but rumors say that if anyone dare to go there,there will be no where out" it makes it seems so mysterious and the reader would want to continue to read.
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