Wednesday, 22 March 2017

Daniel100WC

for the past 2 year i was so bad at swinging and my still bad at swimming at school the swimming class my the last at swimming but my friend is so good at swimming i try my best to swing but i still last at swimming but at gaming my good at it like call of duty black of ops 3 and FIFA and i play on playstation 4 and i use to have a playstation 3 but i can't play on it and i still try to been good at swimming but i can't so i'm a gamer

2 comments:

Mr Paul said...

Swimming is much healthier than video games, you should keep trying.

Also, always use a capital "I" and finish with a full stop.

Ploy said...

I think you need to put the capital letter when you start the sentence and The end of the sentence you need to put the fullstop too.