Wednesday, 22 March 2017
Fast runner.
I may be tall but, I'm not a good at sports at all because my legs aren't that strong so that's why I am always last. I wish I can be a fast runner so, I can impress my friends. At sport day's running event, I try to focus as much as I can to win. "BEEP!" goes the first noise. I run as fast as I can but, suddenly I loses my balance so, I fall down the floor but, I get up and run to the finish line. I lost again but, at least I've try my best.
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Keep trying, like you said, "at least I try my best".
When you use a connective (but, and, so) you don't need to use a comma as well.
I like your story and I want to read too.
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