Sunday, 12 March 2017
Giants day
On one special day called giants of the dead everyone came to see the sculpture that only appears on that day.The story behind it is pretty amazing,there was a girl who was a giant named Alaya she was the only hope to save the land,she had to save a tree that can make anyone the strongest person so she had to become the tree so she went in and when anyone tries to touch it her hand will appear and kill them and on the day she her hand will appear to tell everyone she's alive.
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Very imaginative, I think there is a word missing in the last line "on the day she ????? her hand will appear to tell everyone she's alive."
Your story is good because its very original. Try to add full stops to your long sentences.
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