Tuesday, 7 March 2017

Hard life

Hi my name is Mark Johns and I am one of the people in the refugee.It stared out by me at home with my sick mother,and If you wondered about my father,well that's because my father is in the military trying to protect the country.But he couldn't take care of my family,hours has past by and my father had to came back and told me and my mother that we had to leave the country because of my country are having a war with the Israel tribe.So me and mother stays in a different state.

2 comments:

Mr Paul said...

This shows good empathy with the plight of refugees, but I don't see what it has to do with the picture you are given as a stimulus.

Anonymous said...

I like emotional side of the story.
The grammar needs correction!!
The story needs to be connected.