Wednesday, 8 March 2017
Having a adventure
Today I was playing with my best friends Rose and ploy.We where playing an a adventure game together we where running I the woods we where hiding from ploy because she pretended to be a pirate but she got me and rose.We was lost in the woods so we where walking in a strait line but we fell in a hole and we pasted out in the hole.We woke up and we where in hospital but we where okay we went walking out side and we saw a big hand underneath the tree.We where so glad we where okay.
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Check your spelling.
Very good
Don't forget to put a capital letter at Ploy.
Don't forget to check your spelling before publishing.
Good job!!!!
Hi Bia,
I really like your story.
But you wrote strait were you supposed to write straight?
You must write names (Rose) with a capital letter.
Also don't confuse "where" (a position) and "were" (past tense of "are").
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