Wednesday, 1 March 2017
Having a good day
Today we had spelling test,I walked to my class room gingerly.When I went in to the class room I pick up yellow paper.But when I was walking I fell in a big hole I woke up and discovered a new world.I woke up and saw candy and chocolate waterfall's.I walk around to look and I saw huge candy cane I licked them. But I was't looking where i was going so I fell down a hole. I forgot to lean my spellings it was time for a test one minute later. However it was remarkable.
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Hi Bia,
I like that your story is about coming into a new world. But be careful with your present tense and past tense.
What an adventure, sounds more fun than a spelling test!
Careful using apostrophes, you don't need them to make a word plural (waterfalls).
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