Long time ago in Hawaii, there was a queen called Moana. Her daughter was called Keia. However,she is not really neat. Queen Moana was so worried about Keia. One day,a dark hole appeared on the yellow sand. It sucked her into a mystery world. In that world the people was very neat. So neat that they even lift the cup gingerly to wash. Keia thought that they were remarkable. Keia decided to try her best being neat. Last week, the scientist discovered that Keia was still stuck in that world and never went back to her world again.
1 comment:
You use the word "neat" a lot of times, could you replace some of them with synonyms?
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