Last week was our school's sports day. I came last, like last year and the year before that. On Saturday, I went to visit my mother. She lives in the mountains because she was banished from Edinburgh 5 years ago. She is a witch and she used to do bad spells, but I visited her last year and she seemed as good as ever.
"You were cursed by your great grandmother when you were born. She hates everything about me.'' She said with a wary voice. So that is why I am always last. My great grandmother cursed my family.
3 comments:
Very good Joanna
Don't forget to put a capital letter at She
I like your story because you are very imaginative.
You should use higher vocabulary.
As reasons for coming last go, that is a pretty impressive one!
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