Today I and my friend were going to the hill. Her name is Cherry. We are preparing the things. When we are ready we go to the hill. We go by the car. When we at the hill we have a race who can go at that hill first win. Cherry was very fast and I came LAST because I so tired so why I came the last and cherry said that ok just having fun. I and cherry we were eating the apple and have a drink too when it night I and cherry were playing and we are tired and we keep thing in the bag. Then we came home.
3 comments:
Very good ploy.
In your first sentence it is My friend and I
Hi Ploy,
I like that your friend is named after a berry.
Remember that names (Cherry) always need a capital letter.
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