Wednesday, 22 March 2017

Playing tag

.Today I was going to play tag with my best friend Lisa and Ploy.We went to the play ground and stared to play tag.Lisa Ploy and me where playing tag there where big boys asking me Lisa and ploy for a race.So we said OK we will race you.But we came last and the big boys said you need to stop playing around and focus.And we said.......so that is why I am always last.I said lets go home and play in the pool and play tag in the house.So we went home.

4 comments:

Mr Paul said...

Why does it start with a full stop?

Try not to start a sentence with a connective (and, but, so). Use these to connect two sentences together into one long one.

Anonymous said...

Don't put full stops before starting the story

Anonymous said...

Why did you you put a full stop at the beginning.

Ploy said...

Why you put the full stop at the beginning.