Thursday 30 March 2017

Saige, The Extraordinary

One morning a extraordinary girl called Saige sat on a bench with a book. A big fat book. She usually would never do that. She isn't the book type really. All she wants to do is be a model and pose in front of a big, brown camera. Her beautiful parents were worried, "She hasn't read a book in months!" shouted her mother. " Is she sick?" Her father replied. It was about time to find out. "Mother, Father what are you doing here?" asked Saige. But the parents ignored her "Did you catch a fever or something?" screamed her mother. "Mother, Father calm down I am reading a hard book about modelling that's all." said Saige calmly.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Leah I liked that you used lots of description but next time maybe you could space out the five words.

Rose said...

I really like that you used dialogue

Malou Jensen said...

Hi Leah,
I really like your story!!!!!