Thursday, 23 March 2017

The fight between Megan and me

Yesterday morning I had a big fight between me and my best friend, Megan so I ran and got my horse, Roxy. We went into the woods because I really wanted to be somewhere that was more private than being in the city where it was much more crowded. We did little break near the lake. I opened my notebook and made a drawing of horse drinking water and suddenly I saw a little brown and white fur ball  running towards me. I recognize it. It was Megan's hamster, Nibbles. It came on my lap and it was in telling something. I've got it! Nibbles was telling me that Megan was really sad but how can something so tiny tell me Megan was sad. Megan and me became the best friend ever.

2 comments:

Malou Jensen said...

Hi Lisa,
I really like your story but the sentence "We did little break near the lake," did you mean "We took a little break near the lake?"

Mr Paul said...

Have you changed this to the 132 word challenge?!!!