Wednesday, 15 March 2017
The problem i have
HI i'm Kaynar.I have a problem of me taking very long to chose something,it is super hard for me because there are so many good things i can pick.If i go to the store with my three brothers and they give us a choice of one t shirt my brain will go crazy,it will say something like all of them are nice that one is colorful but everyone of them looks good on you.While i do that my three brothers pick and i'm left with one of them,so that why i am always last.
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Good Job Fiona
Don't forget to put a capital letter at I
I really like how you included your brothers! I don't think anything is wrong with this! Good Work!:)
I like your story because it is true how taking too much time you loose.
Hi Fiona,
were you meant to write hi with all capital letters?
Always use a capital "I" when talking in the 1st person. Always.
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