Friday, 24 March 2017

Tiny

My name is Layla.  Today, my dad promised me that he will take me to the amusement park.I wanted to play the roller coaster first but, my dad told me that I has to eat something first. We were walking to the restaurant  but, I dropped my coin, it keeps on rolling. Finally, it stops. Next to it, there was a paper. I picked it up and read it. It said "Long time ago they believed that even a tiny troll have power to destroy this world. I thought "But how can something tiny so tiny destroy the world?"

1 comment:

Mr Paul said...

Good question!

Remember, don't use commas AND connectives together.