Monday, 3 April 2017
The hiden camera
Long ago in 1999 the first camera was built,ever.The professors name was unknown but we knew about the professor hiding the camera. Many years have gone,detectives have no evidence and the scientists are trying to make another one.One lucky tourist went to a lab with his friends and others and there was a tour gide she told us about the professor but then the tourist saw something,he open the box that said don't open and he found it.It was beautiful,brown and it was still hard,everyone was worried he'd drop it.Then the tourist got 1000,00000 dollars and the camera is safe.
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Hi Fiona
I love your story I really really do, I like it because you talk about the past and history and history is my favorite. Although there is one thing that would be wrong and that is the amount of money the tourist girl received, so what you are saying judging by the commas are that she received one thousand ten thousand dollars, just saying it should be 100,000,000 dollars.
Anyways keep up the good work and watch those commas.
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