Wednesday, 3 May 2017

Am I still alive?

There I was playing catch with my dad in a beautiful forest, where it was starting to get foggy. Sunddely my dad went missing, I ran and ended up in a cave, something sticky driped on my head and it started to rain slime!. As slime dripped through my hands I tried to get out of the cave but it was to late I got trap and slime was coving my face, as it went up to my eyes I thought I was going to die but my dad yelled ''go to school" and It was all a crazy dream.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Valencia
your story is very immaginative and funny

Anonymous said...

Your story is original because you are using personification.

Anonymous said...

The title in your story is powerful.