Tuesday 16 May 2017

party gone wrong

  Today at at house have a party but every one was scared because there are a crocodile in the pool no one want to swimming in the pool.Everybody eyes was open wide because my little sister wearing orange shirt said " I have a bibbide bobbide boo princess wand that fairy give it to me"no one trust her. then! she jump into the pool every on think that within the crocodile belly have my sister inside every one was crying suddenly my sister come up from the pool then the crocodile collapsed so my family put them back to the natural place

2 comments:

Rose said...

I really like your story. But don't forget to put a space after a full stop and not 2 times at at the beginning

mew said...

Thanks!