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One day I went to wash my hand but water came out.I try to stop but the water just kept gushing out.than my mom come she stop that thing than I go to buy a food water went we back I go play my Ipan. Than I walk into my bed room I talk to my friend in massage.I go walk with my husky chihuahua and my mom.We walk for 1 hours I went back to my house with my mom and dog.I love my mom and dog and every one in my house.
3 comments:
"Than my mom" I think it should be then.
Good Job, next time try to be careful of your spelling like "message" not massage.
Nice work check your grammar.
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