Friday 9 June 2017

BingBingwc100

 One day I went to wash my hand but  water came out.I try to stop but the water  just kept gushing out.than my mom come she stop that thing than I go to buy a food water went we back I go play my Ipan. Than I walk into my bed room I talk to my friend in massage.I go walk with my husky  chihuahua and my mom.We walk for 1 hours I went back to my house with my mom and dog.I love my mom and dog and every one in my house.       

3 comments:

Ploy said...

"Than my mom" I think it should be then.

Anonymous said...

Good Job, next time try to be careful of your spelling like "message" not massage.

Unknown said...

Nice work check your grammar.