This morning I woke suddenly
and realized it was super early. I rushed to do my boring homework so that I would
have all day to play. While I was doing my homework, I ate yummy yogurt so
quickly that it smudged on my face like paint.
Realizing I looked
ridiculous, I tip toed to the bathroom. As I passed my brother's room I was
startled by his loud snoring and tripped and hit the floor like a pancake.
I arrived into the huge,
orange bathroom. I turned the tap and the water kept gushing out into my face. My hair
was soaking wet, I was wide awake so, I decided to wash my hair.
2 comments:
HI Lisa,
I like the way you used a similes : fell like a pancake.
Hi Lisa,
I find your story very interesting but remember we are supposed to use the water just kept gushing out.
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