Thursday, 1 June 2017

The Horrible Boat Trip

I held on to the barrel, tightly. I looked around and all my crew members were washed into the ocean. Terrified, I was determined to grab hold of the stirring wheel. Suddenly, I heard a noise BOOM! A wave pounded against the surface of the ship. The sails are broken! I looked for a bucket to clear all the water. Desperately, I tried looking in the cabin but it was just too flooded! In the flash of lightning I saw the ship started sinking even faster! I soon realized that there was only a small piece of ship left. Could this be the end?

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

i like your story so much and fun to read. <3

Anonymous said...

I like the the rhetorical question at the end of your story.I think the question makes the story powerful.