My mom brought me a Kinder egg, and I was so excited to eat it. I kept it in the fridge, I accidentally put it in the freezer! I then took it out and put it on the table. I wanted to eat it so badly that I put it in the microwave. When I took it out it erupted like a volcano. I ran into my room and started crying like a baby. Meanwhile the police man entered the microwave and clean the Lava up. They took a close look dragon in it. They where very scared of it, but it was just a toy. They took the dead dragon and VANISHED!
1 comment:
Hi Rose,
I really liked that you used a simile in your story. But be careful with your tenses.
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