Wednesday 21 June 2017

The Lava Kinder Egg

My mom brought me a Kinder egg, and I was so excited to eat it. I kept it in the fridge, I accidentally put it in the freezer! I then took it out and put it on the table.  I wanted to eat it so badly that I put it in the microwave. When I took it out it erupted like a volcano.  I ran into my room and started crying like a baby. Meanwhile the police man entered the microwave and clean the Lava up.  They took a close look dragon in it. They where very scared of it, but it was just a toy. They took the dead dragon and VANISHED!

1 comment:

Malou Jensen said...

Hi Rose,
I really liked that you used a simile in your story. But be careful with your tenses.