Tonight, is the night where a wizard comes out of the ground, awaking peoples' dreams, but this is how it started...
A hideous wizard who knew everything about magic and more, had a plan - an evil plan. That wizard cooked steel, carrots and tearful eyes, under the ground where nobody lies. This mauve potion will rip the people's eyes and chew their bones and die. That my friends is a vicious sight. We have to end this story here the next part is scarier then this one here. Beware for swear that wizard might be near!...
8 comments:
I like this so much.It can sends shivers down your back!I also really like the parts when it rhymes. Good Job Leah!
I like the rhythm of your writing and how you have some rhyming in there too.
Thanks!
It sounds like a poem but, it was a good story.
I love the story it gives me shivers just thinking about it being real and I like the poetic bit you put in there.
Hi Leah ,I really like your story because it rhymes and it sounds like a poem.Good Job.
Leah,
I like the way you put it in a kind of poem because I love poetry and it gave me a thrill reading the rhymes you wrote. Keep up the writing, I really like it.
I like how you made your story scary and how you made it rhyme. Good Job, keep it up!
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