Friday, 20 January 2017
The changed weather.
My name is Elena the snow fairy. I'am here to tell you a funny story of my polar bears when the weather is changed. The story is taking place in a north pole or where me and they live. My gorgeous pet is a polar bears. I know it might be strange for you that a teeny tiny fairy have a gigantic polar bears as a pet but, if you don't try it you'll never know. Right? Now, the story is , as the weather changed, they run around like when they just ate the hottest chili. They're so funny right?
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Hi Aim,
I like your story it was fantastic, funny and different. I liked that your story was fiction. Maybe next time work on this sentence, My gorgeous pet is a polar bears. Instead you can write, My gorgeous pets are polar bears.
From your friend, Leah.
To Aim
nice idea to do a funny story in the north pole with polar bears but check the spelling on [I'am]
From Fiona
Thank you guys.
That is a funny story, I like your simile describing how they run around.
Remember the North Pole is a place and place names (proper nouns) need capital letters.
Oh,yes I forgot.
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