I lived in a small village called Bocata.
It was a very strange village, the climate was changing, the place was changing, basically every thing was changing. Bocata was a very empty village, only my friend's and I, Bella and Jacob lived there. The next day as the weather changed, they (Bella and Jacob) started acting weird. Their teeth were growing sharper and their eyes changed colors, then I realized they had turn into vampires. Every time, they went in the sun their skin started sparkling. From then on they never went outside again.
3 comments:
Wow, a scary vampire story. Sounds like the weather is not the only thing that was changing!
Careful with "there / their / they're".
there = a place (over there / there is your bag)
their = belongs to them (their house)
they're = they are (they're sisters)
Only my friends and I not my friend's and I.
But, it a wonderful story.
To be honest, did you research a name to put for a town/city because I looked aôn the internet and it is a restaurant! How coincidential!!!!
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