Friday, 20 January 2017
The life of Star
On one wintery morning,A girl who lived far far away from the city lived in a cottage.Her name was Star because she was born on the day where the biggest star passed her as she was born.She could not go to school so she was home schooled by her parents.It was hard to go to any where but they only had to go to the shop but the snow blocked the roads everywhere so they waited.As the weather changed,they got to go to the shop to buy food.It was hard for Star but she loved her home and loves staying with her parents.
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3 comments:
Hi Fiona,
I really liked your story. But next time try to work on your punctuation.
From your friend, Leah.
I like how you have given a reason for Star's name.
Remember, each sentence needs a verb.
Hello Fiona,I love your story it is amazing and as Mr.Paul said the first sentence really needs a verb.
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