Tuesday, 24 January 2017
The mysterious creature.
A girl called Melo was having her breakfast with her lovely family. It was time for her to go to school.She went up stairs to get her bag but, unfortunately her foot stumbled on to the steel chair. She fell on the floor.Then she saw something under the chair. After a while, she noticed that it was a tearful unicorn with a white body and mauve hair. "What's wrong?" asked Melo. The unicorn said "I...I want my carrot back" You mean the carrot that I putted in the bin Yesterday?" The unicorn didn't said any thing but, just faded away.
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5 comments:
Alisa would like this, she loves unicorns!!
Make sure your past tense verbs (ask, fade) are correctly written.
I like that your stories are very magical, great for younger readers.
i like the unicorn part of the the story about when the unicorn wanted the carrot back but make sure to write anything stuck together.
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your story is interesting I like it.
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