Friday 3 February 2017

Lost in the woods

There lived a boy named DJ, he was in a boat with his dad having fun.Year pasted, DJ's dad past away from a rare disease.DJ was heartbroken so he want to the same boat and try to remember how much fun he had with his dad just to cheer him up. DJ was looking beyond the ocean feeling emotional, suddenly the sea was starting to get dryer each second. The boat touch the ground and trees grew before DJ's eyes, he shouted for help but no one heard him, so he starved to death and no one will find him.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

you forgot capital letter in Year.

Mr Paul said...

What a heartbreaking story!

Past tense of "pass" is "passed", so "Years passed, DJ's dad passed away from a rare disease."