Friday 3 February 2017

The time for adventure underwater

Tomorrow trip to Pattaya. Mila will travel by boat. Before we go, we have to be prepared the things before we travel. But this is where we are going with our friends. But we went in the storm season so we have to prepare the things well and if the storm coming we can put the things that safe on like a life jacket.One day later it was the day we would travel to Pattaya. We went to the boat and keep a things. Mila and she friends are in a boat about One hour there was a storm and we went to pick up, but not in time to prepare them. The storm was fast and blew the boat to the shore. More people were severely injured.

3 comments:

Mr Paul said...

You have used some great words like "severely" and "prepare", well done.

"Their was a storm" is wrong because "their" means "belongs to them". You must use "There".

Leah said...

Hi Ploy,
PLEASE check your sentences to make sure they make sense! But I like the concept of your story!

Ploy said...

okay Mr.paul and Leah thank you for your comment.