Thursday, 23 February 2017
With my best friend
Today I was playing with my best friend Kenya.She went to my house for a play date we were pretending to be a mermaid in the pool.After we finished in the pool we went to see my big sister and than we saw a boy fell down and than his head got stuck in the couch and we cried with laughter.After that we went to the beach and build a sand castle together and we barred each other in the sand.After we finish in the beach we went to the park to play on some slides.
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In the sentence 'fell down and than his head got stuck' You spelled then wrong.Other than that I really like how you and Kenya went to many places.
Do not for get to check your spelling.
Sounds a fun day out!
careful with the past tense (After that we went to the beach and BUILT a sand castle together and we BURIED each other in the sand.After we finishED in the beach we went to the park to play on some slides.
Hi Bia,
I really like that you go many places in your story.
Try not to get confused with past tense and present tense.
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