I once was walking in a public park and whenever I go there,there is always something strange but this time it was that strange it was
remarkable strange so I went to look,'Ahhh' I screamed as I saw a
yellow creature that goes by the name of a chupacabra.Later when I got home I tried
discovered this creature is a blood sucker,I went back to the park and
gingerly walk to it
however it was sleeping so it won't attack me or suck my blood,but as I walked away it woke up and tried to catch me!
3 comments:
This is a vampire bug
SCARY!!!!!!!
Where is this park?
In the first sentence you put three times the adjective "STRANGE"
what does there,there mean? and what park are you talking about. I got confuse what does this mean chupacabra? well done for doing 100 words.
Rose is right, try to use a variety of adjectives.
Do you know that Chupacabra actually means "goat sucker" because in the legends they attack goats and suck their blood?
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