Wednesday, 1 March 2017

Scary Park

I once was walking  in a public park and whenever I go there,there is always something strange but this time it was that strange it was remarkable strange so I went to look,'Ahhh' I screamed as I saw a yellow creature that goes by the name of a chupacabra.Later when I got home I tried discovered this creature is a blood sucker,I went back to the park and gingerly walk to it however it was sleeping so it won't attack me or suck my blood,but as I walked away it woke up and tried to catch me!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is a vampire bug
SCARY!!!!!!!
Where is this park?
In the first sentence you put three times the adjective "STRANGE"

Mimi said...

what does there,there mean? and what park are you talking about. I got confuse what does this mean chupacabra? well done for doing 100 words.

Mr Paul said...

Rose is right, try to use a variety of adjectives.

Do you know that Chupacabra actually means "goat sucker" because in the legends they attack goats and suck their blood?