Wednesday, 3 May 2017

A Child, A Sensation

Ava read some article about slime. It looked interesting and pleasing. The slime had a gold shimmer that reminded her of the soft summer's sun. She looked at the store door it was called "Charlie's creations of slime." She only had a pound in her coat but she took it out and headed strait for the door. There were lots of kids screaming and shouting. Ava smiled at their joyful look on their faces. "Miss, would you like anything?" asked the owner. "Can I get the golden slime from the article, please?" she asked politely. The man took the golden slime and placed it on her hands. Ava paid the man and ran outside. The slime dripped through the gaps of her fingers. It was a wonderful sensation!

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Leah
I like your vocabulary and your story
It was perfect!

Anonymous said...

I like the vocabulary used.