Wednesday, 3 May 2017

Bat Cave

I cautiously walked through the dark cave as I heard the bats squeak. The insects tickled my toes and they ran across the stone ground. Something landed on my head. I stopped walking and slowly looked up. It was a gooey green mixture. Slime? The slime dripped through the ceiling even though there were no cracks at all. I reached my hand to touch the ceiling, then some stones light up. Then, the ground shook and opened up. I fell inside and was panicking. It was really bright so I was blinded for a few seconds. I opened my eyes....mom?

3 comments:

Malou Jensen said...

Hi Joanna,
I really like your story because I can read it over and over again without getting bored of it.

Anonymous said...

Hi JOanna
I like your story very much and you are a good story teller!

Anonymous said...

I love your story but the end wasn't really clear.