I cautiously walked through the dark cave as I heard the bats squeak. The insects tickled my toes and they ran across the stone ground. Something landed on my head. I stopped walking and slowly looked up. It was a gooey green mixture. Slime?
The slime dripped through the ceiling even though there were no cracks at all. I reached my hand to touch the ceiling, then some stones light up. Then, the ground shook and opened up. I fell inside and was panicking. It was really bright so I was blinded for a few seconds. I opened my eyes....mom?
3 comments:
Hi Joanna,
I really like your story because I can read it over and over again without getting bored of it.
Hi JOanna
I like your story very much and you are a good story teller!
I love your story but the end wasn't really clear.
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