Today I want to make good slime,but i'm scared that the slime will drip trough. So I had an idea that I could look on youtube. I look so much on youtube,but i don't have the stuff. yesterday i saw a video that you could make slime in a easy way! The ingriedients are: body soap, shampoo and salt ( add little by little).
So when i'm home,i go make it right away. I'll make one for my little sister too. I don't know if it will work.
At least i'll try. And if it do not work I go and find more easy ways.
5 comments:
Very good
You need to put capital letters at'I'
I like how you used real life information because that way we know how to Make slime!!
I really like your piece of hand writing.( i love your name )
'Wink' 'Wink' ;)
Also,I loved the way you have described this short story,but you should really use more verbs to describe this story as it would have make it more intresting
Hi Charlize,
I like that you tell the ingredients to the reader but be careful with your tense.
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