Wednesday 17 May 2017

The forest

Today I went to my friend house for a sleep over. When I arrived we went to play in the forest and we saw a pond so we walk up to it and when we got closer and a orange crocodile  chased us. We ran up the tree house and it collapsed within 5 minutes. And we ran on the wide road to go to my friends house we went in her room and we played on her soft bed and we play video games and watched TV and had some snacks and then we went to bed.

2 comments:

Rose said...

I like your story because you have alot of imagination in your story

Leah said...

Hi Bia,
I love the concept of your story!
Please check your work more carefully next time.
Keep up the good work!
Leah