I cautiously walked down the
wide corridor, as I felt a pair of eyes piercing into my soul. I've been lost here for who knows how long.
Within the second, the ground
collapsed making me fall into a hole. I was in a dark cave but there was a lantern. In the distant I could see an
orange lake. I think this is man-made. An orange lake just doesn't make sense. I saw something come out of the lake. A baby
crocodile. It came close to me. I bent down to touch it and then the cave started to collapse...
5 comments:
great piece of writing.
I like the mystery ending.
I really like your story because it is creative but I don't know if a orange lake exist.
Hi Joanna,
I really like your story because it's very imaginary.
This was all well written!
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