Friday, 2 June 2017

My favorite place

Woshh! In a flash of lightning I saw.....the future my dad on the ground and a gang of people with a gun"NO!" I screamed I reached out but the image disappeared.While i was crying ,the floor started to shake CRACK! I was falling down so slow I thought it was an infinity falling place.Finally I saw water SPLASH I was in the waster and I swam up to take a breath "times up for Allaya"the speaker said.Ohh I forgot to tell you guys where I was,I was at Davally my favorite place in the whole wide world!The end.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I like your story and your use of onomatopoeia