Thursday, 26 January 2017
The best Christmas eve
Merry Christmas everyone! Pop goes the shiny confetti and everyone was laughing and having fun.When it was time for me and my annoying brother to open our gift rapping presents.After the presents were open, I'll show you what i got.The presents were OK but at least I got something, right? I got a hat made of steel,carrots,tearful candy drops those were my favorite, under all of that my brother got a mauve knitting sweater that was too big and girly for him.Everyone laughed except my grandma but it was still so funny, Merry Christmas!.
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This story kind of reminds me of Christmas. It is very different from other stories that I have read. Keep the work up!!!
Leah
Great opener, really involves the reader!
Be careful with were / where / wear / we're;
Where - a place (Where are you? Where is my house?)
We're - We are (We're from Hua Hin.)
Wear - clothing (I wear blue socks.)
Were - past tense of To Be (We were out on the playground.)
Thanks
I with a capital letter please.
I wonder why the grandma didn't laugh can you tell me Fiona?
I like how you wrote rhetorical questions.
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