Friday 3 February 2017

The lucky friends.

¨Run!¨ yelled the man as he rushed into considerable ship. The man with his friends tried to get out of the creepy island as fast as they could because there was a frightening monster chasing after them. Luckily, they got into the boat just in time then they quickly leaved the island.  That night, there was enormous tsunami that pushed everybody into the sea. The man helped his friend by putting them on top of the edge of the boat. Then the boat got pushed by the sea into the forest. The man's friends survived but, the man didn't.

1 comment:

Mr Paul said...

Sounds scary, and I like your use of adjectives like creepy and frightening. I'm not sure what a "considerable ship" is though.